ext_25966 ([identity profile] dreamsofspike.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] citrusjava 2015-02-08 01:35 am (UTC)

Okay, I was enjoying this, thinking how sweet it was and how well you captured Sam's mannerisms, etc...

Then I got to THIS line:

The further down the line you go, the more you have to love to try again. - and the simple truth of that, and the implications it holds for Sam and Dean - how much Sam loves that even after everything that's happened between them, he's still holding on, still fighting for them, willing to "try again" - wow. That's an emotional gut punch I wasn't expecting and makes this more than just sweet, it's powerful.

Beautifully done. <3

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